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Along the journey, leaving Federation territory, upwardly, a new empire is discovered, but they know of the Federation that has existed below them, they are not friendly towards the Federation. They refuse to allow passage, but Captain Clevel decides to push through. The ensuing battle causes great damage to the ship, | Along the journey, leaving Federation territory, upwardly, a new empire is discovered, but they know of the Federation that has existed below them, they are not friendly towards the Federation. They refuse to allow passage, but Captain Clevel decides to push through. The ensuing battle causes great damage to the ship, one of the reasons later they must abandon ship. A certain shield component that can't be replaced gets broken, and it's the special shield modification that allows the ship's engines to safely interact with the rings around the planet. This ultimately results in the ship exploding during evacuation, causing all pods and shuttles to be thrown off course. | ||
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Whenever possible, cinematically, use long single takes, moving from one character to another as they interact or pass by each other. Keep all talking characters in frame, or a few over the shoulder shots orbiting talking characters, | Whenever possible, cinematically, use long single takes, moving from one character to another as they interact or pass by each other. Keep all talking characters in frame, or a few over the shoulder shots orbiting talking characters, | ||
Quote: If you state too long into the abyss, the abyss states back at you. | |||
Latest revision as of 21:55, 27 January 2026
Along the journey, leaving Federation territory, upwardly, a new empire is discovered, but they know of the Federation that has existed below them, they are not friendly towards the Federation. They refuse to allow passage, but Captain Clevel decides to push through. The ensuing battle causes great damage to the ship, one of the reasons later they must abandon ship. A certain shield component that can't be replaced gets broken, and it's the special shield modification that allows the ship's engines to safely interact with the rings around the planet. This ultimately results in the ship exploding during evacuation, causing all pods and shuttles to be thrown off course.
Explore character interactions, philosophies, and societal development.
Whenever possible, cinematically, use long single takes, moving from one character to another as they interact or pass by each other. Keep all talking characters in frame, or a few over the shoulder shots orbiting talking characters,
Quote: If you state too long into the abyss, the abyss states back at you.
